heres a part from my book...a few thing first
yes i am awere of mispeling and wrong words i just dont know how
yes i know of the messed up punctuation agen i do not know
no i do not have a name yet
I woke to the sound of explosions. My eyes snapped open warning alarms blaring.”Katish attack evacuate immediately”. It would go on like this several times before going into a series of wailing and beeping. But that was not important I had to get out, grab the children and run. I burst down the hall and burst through the door and grabbed the crying baby but could not find his sister. “Mom” I spun around “mom what’s going on” I saw her in the bark hall she was tall and lean with dark hair and a face like her fathers. “Damn it terra, what are you still doing inside out out”! “But” she stammered obviously confused “no buts now move”. “Fine ill go, but where”. I stopped for a moment “mom”? Then I snapped back “follow” is all I said. We ran down the stairs and into the chaos. I knew if we tried to go through the streets we would not make it “come” and with that I started to go around the house. We cut through back yards and ally way and did so for several blocks until we were stopped in our tracks by a bomb crater. It was too big to go around and make it in time we had to go through. “we have to go through” I said “what you’re kidding right” Terra exclaimed “no I’m not” and with that I climbed down the side and once I found a place to stand “hand me the baby” I said. Terra did so and began to climb down herself. About half way through the first landing pods came crashing down. “run” is all I said. Ounce we reached the other end I felt the heat of a Katish blaster fly by my head then the warm flow of blood that followed.” Mom are you ok” Terra screamed “I’m fine, now up you go”. When she reached the top I handed her the baby “take Sam and run for evac” I said “what about you” terra asked “I’ll be fine now go”. And with that she ran. I started to pull myself up pain growing on the left side of my head. I was about half way up when another blast flew by almost taking of my arm. As I was pulling myself up another bolt flew by. I looked for Terra and saw her in the distance I ran to catch up. When I reached the pad I saw terra. I went up and grabbed her shoulder she jumped so high she nearly dropped the baby. “there’ll be hell to pay if you drop that kid” I said jokingly “mom” she turned around relief showing in her face. “so what now” she said “you go on the stallion, I’ll go on the duchess” and with that panic reappeared on Terra’s face. ”Why won’t you come with us” tears forming in her eyes “don’t worry” I said “your seventeen and perfectly able to take care of yourself” with that I leaned down and kissed Sam on the forehead “I love you” I whispered into his ear. Standing I hugged Terra for one last time kissing her cheek and holding her close like a lioness protecting her cub. When I pulled away to my horror her face was covered in fresh blood then I realized it was mine. But for a moment I thought of taking them with me, But I knew I could not .I wiped away the mix of blood and tears and then turned for the duchess. I entered the loading bay and watched as the world disappeared behind the closing door. It was dark and smelled of blood and sweat. Suddenly the lights flashed on and the intercom sparked to life. “Welcome to the duchess colony class capital ship”. It shut off for a moment then crackled back “please stand clear while the ramp descends”. A large ramp began to open to the main holds. “oh and take off in 10..9..8..7..6..5..4..3..2..1.
what do you think
